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This is the eighth episode of Platinum: Zach's Nuzlocke.

Plot[]

Zach and his Pokemon are walking into the gym, muscles on their arms.

Zach: I HEARD THIS WAS THE FIGHTING GYM! I HAVE FLYING... TYPES?

A bunch of people are staring at him, in a dark room, surrounded by low flames.

Boy: This is the GHOST-type Gym.

Zach: ...But... I don't have anything super-effective against Ghost.

Boy: ...I-Is that... A Crobat?

Zach: Oh yeah.

The boy's expression goes from nervousness to fright.

Boy: D-D-Does it kn-kn-know Bite?

Zach: Yeah...

Boy: EVERYBODY, HE'S GOT A CROBAT WITH BIIIITE!

All the Gym Trainers scream, and fling their Pokemon at him, cowering behind them.

Bruce: Um...

Mike: Ghost-types. All of them. Welp, I'm not gonna be any use.

Mike jumps into Zach's bag, equips the EXP Share, and hops out.

Starita: Zach? What do we do now?

Zach: BRUCE, BITE SPAM!

Bruce rapidly uses Bite, one shotting every Pokemon, while Mike receives half the EXP from each kill.

Mike: Enjoyably lazy. AW YEAH.

Benny: Go for it Bruce!

Max: HE'S DA MAN!

Bruce: Mmmm... That was fun. Not much blood since they're uh... Ghosts.

Suddenly, a tall lady with purple hair and a purle dress lands in front of them, a light behind her.

Fantina: You are ze Zach, I presume?

Zach: Yeah, how'd you...

The light moves out from behind Fantina, revealing a glowing ball of electricity.

Zach: ROTATION!?

Rotation: Yupperdoodles. I told her how you have that Crobat, and she found a Pokemon that will perfectly destroy it.

Zach: BUT YOU'RE MY POKEMON!

Rotation: Yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah but I'm also a low-tier legendary!

Max: But isn't that just like debatable?

Rotation: ZIP IT MACHOP!

Fantina: The only reason I trusted this adorable little Pokemon is because he's part Ghost-type.

Rotation: Awww yeaaaaah!

Rotation flies off, and through the wall, emitting a flash of light as doing so.

Fantina: What a charming Pokemon.

Zach: You. Me. Battle. Now.

Fantina: If you insist. Duskull, show this guy what happens to those who mess with Ghost-types.

A Duskull appears out of what seems to be thin air, floating beside Fantina.

Zach: Bruce, Bite.

Bruce: With pleasure.

Bruce bites into Duskull, and Duskull flies around in terror, and falls limp.

Bruce: Too easy.

Fantina: Return, my precious Duskull.

Fantina retrieves Duskull, then flings a Pokeball into the shadows.

Fantina: Haunter, show them we mean business!

A Haunter flies out from the shadows, and straight towards Bruce.

Zach: BRUCE, NO!

Bruce: Psssssh. Please.

Bruce seems to vanish from sight just before Haunter slashes at where he was.

Haunter: ...What in the-

Bruce flies straight into Haunter, biting him on the top of the head.

Haunter: NOOOOOOO! NOT COOL... MAN...

Haunter turns to gas, and flies into his Pokeball.

Zach: "Perfect Pokemon" huh? So far, I seem to be obliterating your entire team.

Fantina: It's not over yet! Mismagius, it's all on you!

Fantina throws her Pokeball into the air, and it pops open, revealing a shiny Mismagius.

Mike: ...This is like an EXP party! And a SHINY? Wish I could attack it...

Bruce: Zach, I'm not sure this is a good idea...

Zach: Come on, what's the worst this thing could do? BITE.

Bruce bites Mismagius, and brings it down to 1/7 HP, and Mismagius eats its Sitrus Berry, then its eyes glow purple.

Fantina: MISMAGIUS... PSYBEAM!

Zach: WAIT, WHAT? NO! NO NO NO! BRUCE, DODGE IT!

Bruce flies away from it, but the beam follows him, and hits him in the back.

Voice: CRITICAL HIT.

Bruce falls to the floor, barely breathing.

Fantina: Looks like your Crobat has finally fallen.

Mismagius: MWAHAHAHA! Just like a CROBAT to expect to dodge my attacks.

Zach runs to Bruce, tears forming in his eyes.

Zach: Bruce... Please... Don't die...

Max: B-Bruce?

Bruce: Zach... Don't let.... My death... Be in vain...

Zach: BRUCE, GET UP!

Mismagius comes closer, smirking.

Mismagius: He won't be getting up, kid. And if you're smart, you'll leave before ALL your Pokemon are like this.

Zach: BRUCE, COME ON!

Mismagius comes, barely a foot away from Bruce and Zach.

Pluckerz: Come on Zach, I can take her!

Mismagius: Magical Leaf fool!

Pluckerz: Grr...

Zach suddenly smiles.

Mismagius: What are you smiling about, little boy?

Zach: This entire time... You've been falling into a trap.

Mismagius: What do you-

Bruce flies up immediately, and bites Mismagius.

Voice: CRITICAL. HIT.

Fantina: Nooo!

Mismagius falls, wide-eyed, and Fantina returns it to her Pokeball.

Zach: Bruce, that was a risky tactic...

Bruce: Hey, I lived, didn't I?

Zach: Yeah... But with 4 HP.

Bruce: I'm still... Alive...

Bruce passes out, and Zach gently returns him to his Pokeball.

Fantina: Hmph. I guess you did alright. Here's your badge.

Fantina tosses Zach a badge, the center a gray circle, with a triangle of purple circles, and Zach grabs it.

Zach: I got... The Relic Badge!

Pluckerz: Aw yeah!

Zach: Come on, let's go get Bruce healed up.

Zach runs out of the gym, and Rotation flies into the gym, looking at Fantina.

Fantina: Rotom, you've come back.

Rotation: It's Rotation now. I came to talk to you about my past.

Fantina: Your past?

Rotation: Don't play dumb, Fantina. I know you were my original trainer.

Fantina sighs, a hint of pain in her expression.

Fantina: I will admit, I was once your trainer.

Rotation: Then why did you release me?

Fantina: Because, I sensed you were destined for another life, outside of Gym Battling.

Rotation: .....Thank you, Fantina. That's all I wanted to know.

Rotation flies away, and Fantina smiles slightly.

Fantina: No, Rotation. Thank you for making my hopes come true.

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